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Background Practice #1 | Critique Requested

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First... backgroundy thing I did
I made this with no reference at all
and the only thing I like about it is the way I do trees

Requesting Critiques.  Suggestions on how to improve would be VERY appreciated~

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The are a few things that I can point out in this piece. To start out the gradients on the grass are a bit random. Some parts should have light gradient, while the other shouldn't. The tree placement is a bit alined, when tree placement should be more random. The gradients are a bit strong, seeing that it appears that it is night (correct me if I am wrong), but they do make the piece interesting. I would like to say that I think the polkadots look interesting, and are transparent enough to not be distracting, but still be visible. Other than that I think this is pretty good, and it could be a functional background.